Alexa Thyme: Breaking Through – Lykanthropy

Semi-standard LitRPG: People can obtain skills, attributes, and classes. People can go into dungeons to improve all of the above, and get rewards. There is a System for managing the rewards and improvements. People with exception skills, attributes, and classes can become super heroes.

Some good twists: The system has been subverted, and people who think they are running dungeons and making tactical decisions about NPCs are actually taking sides between factions that mean to take over our world.

An oddly-engaging character: Alexa Thyme is interesting, despite her socially-crippling lack of affect. Her extreme competence keeps her social interactions on the side of comedy. (She suffers from alexithymia, meaning that she has emotions, but does not know how to interact with them.)

Good story telling, weak plotting: As is often the case in LitRPG, much of the word count is spent defeating dungeons and monsters (and, in the real world, rivals and plotters). The defeats are entertaining, but tend to crowd out the larger story.

Weak proofreading, or perhaps none. To the point of distracting the reader from the story, frequently.